Review my Personal Statement?

[AdenineThomasPhosphate]

I will be applying to Medical School this Spring, but I prepared this one for the application of my University's Pre-Health Advisory Committee. I am applying to it as a alumnus. This is my first go at one, and will certainly revise it to nauseam/ write new ones for the real Medical School applications. I just want to see what people think of my first try.

I had my brother and Dad edit each edit it, but they don't really know what a personal statement for medical school really should be. So I thought I'd post it here.

I'm looking for feedback, be as critical as you can, I won't take it personally.

I can PM you the word file or give you access to my google doc.

Thanks

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[imxpandanese]

I would advise you remove the attached file for confidentiality reasons. Many people on SDN would be happy to edit for you if you PM them.

Good luck!

 

[jtd2081]

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