PS review

[dasitman]

Hey all,


2nd time applicant. Running late this cycle due to funds sadly, but prepping to have my apps sent towards the end of this month. Would you guys mind giving me some feedback on my PS? Thanks!

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[dasitman]

Must have done well if no critique and suggestions for the ps this year. Thanks guys

 

[dasitman]

Final bump for PS advise here. Will be sending my apps finally this weekend. I have changed some words here n there to be more politically correct, but would like more eyes to peek on this. Just want to know my "why" is clear, and my story maintains the point.



Late af this cycle, but hope I get some bites. I know burrell bugged me late into the cycle last year. Fingers crossed and thanks in advance

 

[gb_19]

Hi! I did a quick edit in case that’s helpful for you, but I can’t figure out how to attach the word document. I’ll include a screenshot but if you would like it emailed to you let me know! Good job and good luck!

 

[dasitman]

Hi! I did a quick edit in case that’s helpful for you, but I can’t figure out how to attach the word document. I’ll include a screenshot but if you would like it emailed to you let me know! Good job and good luck!View attachment 326160

super helpful, thank you! an emailed copy would be lovely. My email is @ [email protected]

 

[gb_19]

super helpful, thank you! an emailed copy would be lovely. My email is @ [email protected]

Sent!

 

[dasitman]

Sent!

appreciate it!