Navy Motivational Statement Help

[surfline]

I was wondering if any HPSP applicants from previous cycles would be willing to share their motivational statements. I am stumped, and would I love to get an idea as to how previously successful applicants constructed their statement.

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[Bis-GMA111]

what are your reasons for wanting to join? aside from wanting to serve my country, i doubt my life experiences would apply to you (not to sound like a jerk or anything)

 

[vellnueve]

Why do you want to be a dentist? Why do you want to serve?

 

[w4nt2baDDS]

what gives you purpose? who/what motivates you? what makes you a good fit for the military? will you make a strong officer? can you lead? can you work in a team setting? are you resilient?

 

[surfline]

If you dont want to share your statements, would you guys mind sharing how you have led, and how it correlates to being a strong officer?

 

[BeaverLover]

Did you try asking your recruiter for samples?

 

[surfline]

Did you try asking your recruiter for samples?

Yes, he sent me a motivational statement of a pilot...