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Hello, This is my essay but I am having a hard time fixing it.
"A first generation Latina student with aspirations of becoming a doctor. My mom; a single mother and an immigrant, supporting her four children with the help of government assistance. My mom struggled to maintain us but above it all ensured that we prioritized school. I’ve had a job since the age of 13, working during the summer until I turned 16 and was able to work during the school year. School was always a challenge, even though I learned English at a very young age, I was bullied for having an accent during high school but as I grew older, I learned to embrace it as it. College didn’t seem like an option to me but I discovered that my disadvantages were a gift allowing me be eligible to attend higher education. During my second semester at MCLA , my maternal grandmother in Dominican Republic passed away, this was a hard time for my family, I feel behind in classes that semester as I was more focused with what was going on at home instead off my studies. Every year I made sure to retake the classes that I did not do well in. Determination has kept me going through my difficult journey to becoming a doctor."
"A first generation Latina student with aspirations of becoming a doctor. My mom; a single mother and an immigrant, supporting her four children with the help of government assistance. My mom struggled to maintain us but above it all ensured that we prioritized school. I’ve had a job since the age of 13, working during the summer until I turned 16 and was able to work during the school year. School was always a challenge, even though I learned English at a very young age, I was bullied for having an accent during high school but as I grew older, I learned to embrace it as it. College didn’t seem like an option to me but I discovered that my disadvantages were a gift allowing me be eligible to attend higher education. During my second semester at MCLA , my maternal grandmother in Dominican Republic passed away, this was a hard time for my family, I feel behind in classes that semester as I was more focused with what was going on at home instead off my studies. Every year I made sure to retake the classes that I did not do well in. Determination has kept me going through my difficult journey to becoming a doctor."