'Adversity' Secondary Essay Help

[Blue96]

Having difficulty with 'adversity' secondary essay to say the least.
Thinking of discussing the challenges I encountered teaching guitar lessons to disadvantaged teens. A few divulged some major personal struggles with me, some never practiced and wanted to quit. Having come from a pure musical background I needed to definitely re-think my method of teaching music and incorporate a more holistic approach to keep the students attending the lessons.
Is this okay?

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[mindlight1]

I do think it's workable - you can discuss how it was a surprise to you to hear about the personal struggles, and you challenged yourself to develop empathic listening skills.