Personal Statement Help?

[HeadedSOuth]

Hi everyone,

I'm nearly complete with my application for Anesthesiology Assistant (AA) programs, but I'm unsatisfied with my personal statement. I've requested help from an english professor I've got along well with in the past to help with grammar/conventions, but I want to solidify my content first before I show her my draft.

Would anyone be willing to take some time to critique my personal statement?

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[yourfuturephysician]

Hi everyone,

I'm nearly complete with my application for Anesthesiology Assistant (AA) programs, but I'm unsatisfied with my personal statement. I've requested help from an english professor I've got along well with in the past to help with grammar/conventions, but I want to solidify my content first before I show her my draft.

Would anyone be willing to take some time to critique my personal statement?

I can look at it if you would still like someone to look at it. Currently finishing up my own actually